I love thi stoy i cant wait to read more! I like how u write all idk... like that! CANT WAIT FOR THE REST!

i loved it and hope the next chapter comes out soon

Really good chapter...can't wait to see more of it...You have me in suspense with waiting...just hoping there will be life in the next chapter.

Death, No...She is going to live. She is going to live. live. live...

A story such as this, it would be a shame to end with Her death. Would not His story be laking without Her?

I say 'great', But only if she lives or lives in death as a vampire.

-M T Soul-

you ended the chapter too soon.

and a question: do you like Michealangelo's work?

o.O;

Wow. Talk about power of the pen... or computer... or whatever. Dang... Would it count that I started crying? Not really what you described in the beginning note... but it did have an emotion.

You really have me interested in this now. The way you wrote was very captivating, though I noticed one small part where you switched from 1st to 3rd person. But it was okay.

Over all... the story was absolutly wonderful!

-ShimoAneue