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| Elle Winters 9 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abusewow... that was amazing .. ly short joking.. i enjoyed it. simple and sweet =) |
| Monnie 2008-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Just wow. I really really loved it :) |
| xxstarryeyedxx 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abusewow that was really good! I enjoyed it. xxstarryeyedxx |
| Sarah Allie 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseMy GOD! That was so sad :(. Good job, though, and congrats on getting nominated for SKoW! :D |
| fish lips 2008-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a wonderful one shot and a particularly lovely ending! |
| skydancersrule 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseWow. It's so short but as the lines went through my head, I could see a pretty good idea of what happened. I like it a lot. No names, no faces. Just words and emotions. Very well done. (: |
| luv me like no other 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseso sad...but i liked the organization lots. it made sense to do it this way. |
| Cashaholic 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseargh.. this is too cute.. and SAD =( no... how can karma be so cruel? x. Cashaholic |
| d666lisa 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseBRILLIANT STORY |
| OctoberSkies 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseAW! I was listening to Dont speak by no doubt while reading this...SO SAD! Addint to faves! |
| Singingperson 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI got to this from The Skow awards. The title caught my eye. This is wonderfully done. You convey so much with so few words. I got a lump in my throat.. It's really good. |
| angels and airwaves 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseMy heart just broke at the last sentence. :( Anyway, brilliant job with this. :) The rhyme sets it apart from the usual one-shots and it's awesome that majority of the story comprises of just a letter, but the emotions ring so clearly. This really impacted me. Well done! :) |
| falling from the ninth floo... 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseloved this oneshot nice job :] |
| jekodama 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseNice work. Angsty, yet not overbearingly so, and nicely written. The rhymes in between sections add an interesting touch to the flow. |
| Lalaith7 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseIt's interesting, but I think the number rhyme thing kind of interrupts the flow, would it be possible to move it or do without it? |