Woah. The last bit took me by surprise. Since I consider myself a bit of a hypocritical cynic, I usually know how the ending of the story would be like before I reached the end. I expected this to be one of those weepy stories from the perspective of a broken-hearted girl with an ending somewhere along the lines of: "I shut the envelope. And cried for 31 days. Which just so happened to be the amount of days we dated." But like I said, you proved me wrong.

The reason I mentioned that I'm hypocritical is because I write sappy, cliched ** too. That's why I stereotype stories very often. I guess it really does take one to know one. And so, my point is that because you've proven me wrong, I'll try not to stereotype that often. Also, I love your writing style, because it's simple yet powerful at the same time. Keep it up!

Aww...sad :(

xx

Oh no! ...they have to end up together... i want them to. i NEED them to.
please?
are you going to add more chapters? i hope so! It says in your author note that reviews keep you writing...so keep writing!
update soon please!

It's strange, but it's nice...

OMG. I so love the rhyme! You are damn good!
Luv,
d.k

wow... that was amazing



.. ly short

joking.. i enjoyed it. simple and sweet =)

Wow. Just wow. I really really loved it :)

wow that was really good! I enjoyed it.

xxstarryeyedxx

My GOD! That was so sad :(. Good job, though, and congrats on getting nominated for SKoW! :D

That was a wonderful one shot and a particularly lovely ending!

Wow. It's so short but as the lines went through my head, I could see a pretty good idea of what happened. I like it a lot. No names, no faces. Just words and emotions. Very well done. (:

so sad...but i liked the organization lots. it made sense to do it this way.

argh.. this is too cute.. and SAD =( no... how can karma be so cruel?

x. Cashaholic

BRILLIANT STORY

AW! I was listening to Dont speak by no doubt while reading this...SO SAD! Addint to faves!