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Elle Winters 9
2008-07-04
ch 1,
abusewow... that was amazing



.. ly short

joking.. i enjoyed it. simple and sweet =)
Monnie
2008-04-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow. Just wow. I really really loved it :)
xxstarryeyedxx
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abusewow that was really good! I enjoyed it.

xxstarryeyedxx
Sarah Allie
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abuseMy GOD! That was so sad :(. Good job, though, and congrats on getting nominated for SKoW! :D
fish lips
2008-01-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was a wonderful one shot and a particularly lovely ending!
skydancersrule
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseWow. It's so short but as the lines went through my head, I could see a pretty good idea of what happened. I like it a lot. No names, no faces. Just words and emotions. Very well done. (:
luv me like no other
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseso sad...but i liked the organization lots. it made sense to do it this way.
Cashaholic
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuseargh.. this is too cute.. and SAD =( no... how can karma be so cruel?

x. Cashaholic
d666lisa
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuseBRILLIANT STORY
OctoberSkies
2007-10-27
ch 1,
abuseAW! I was listening to Dont speak by no doubt while reading this...SO SAD! Addint to faves!
Singingperson
2007-10-17
ch 1,
abuseI got to this from The Skow awards. The title caught my eye.
This is wonderfully done.
You convey so much with so few words.
I got a lump in my throat..
It's really good.
angels and airwaves
2007-10-16
ch 1,
abuseMy heart just broke at the last sentence. :(

Anyway, brilliant job with this. :) The rhyme sets it apart from the usual one-shots and it's awesome that majority of the story comprises of just a letter, but the emotions ring so clearly. This really impacted me. Well done! :)
falling from the ninth floo...
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseloved this oneshot
nice job :]
jekodama
2007-08-07
ch 1,
abuseNice work. Angsty, yet not overbearingly so, and nicely written. The rhymes in between sections add an interesting touch to the flow.
Lalaith7
2007-07-05
ch 1,
abuseIt's interesting, but I think the number rhyme thing kind of interrupts the flow, would it be possible to move it or do without it?
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