Why doesn't the top line have five syllables? Otherwise, a great show of emotion.

I've just started writing haikus. Could you read them?

Bloody

hmm, i like it... it's cute - but, u'kno it's so true && idk why it's so hard 3

Very nice touch to this haiku...the emotion/feeling is displayed well. Nice job.

it's hard to move on...that's all...

nice...