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| tearitrightup 2007-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseo. did you change the summary? maybe not. hehe. sorry about that. |
| tearitrightup 2007-01-26 ch 9, | abuseLOL. ok. i love the notes on napkins thing. aw, i really want jake. he is such a sweetheart. but then they'll accept candice later on, right? cause james and candice will start to love each other? i think it said that in your summary. if you wanna surprise us, i suggest leaving it out of the summary. but just a suggestion. ^^ keep updating! |
| under the influence 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI am definitely intrigued by the beginnings of this story. Will read more soon! :) |
| tearitrightup 2007-01-23 ch 8, | abuse“I’m getting married to the hottest man on the planet!” LOL. and i love how jake kept saying, sophy, you're so low maintenance. that's really cute. ya, keep updating please!! |
| tearitrightup 2007-01-22 ch 7, | abuseonly one chapter?? is that all i get? ok, fine. haha, i loved how you listed the names of the people in the order they were standing in...while they were waiting for the tickets. that was creative. UPDATE SON PlEASE!! |
| Mangoes are Frivolous 2007-01-21 ch 6, | abuseI love everyone. Except Candice. Do I win the character-loving contest? Anyway, yes, I like this. It's different from the usual romance-category stories, which I won't bother to outline, since you most likely know what they're like anyway. Yes. I fail at ending reviews. |
| tearitrightup 2007-01-20 ch 6, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE ANNA. gosh. I LOVE THIS STORY. please please please update soon! |
| AHopelessDreamer 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, amazing writing and a story that piques my curiosity! I can't wait to read what happens next, I will definitley be following this from now on, keep writing! I look forward to seeing the many sides of Candice and how she will be stopped. Don't have any suggestions yet, it's written quite eloquently. I also would like some feed back on my story, if you have time: I will read on now! |
| tearitrightup 2007-01-18 ch 4, | abusedamn. i LOVE this story. please keep updating. the first chapter was a teeny bit confusing, but it might just be me. i love jake. he's a sweetheart. |