I LOVE the chorus! I'm not as good of a songwriter as you, but this is really good! Good job!

~Kat

Cool song. I liked it. Good job.

I have a question...how do you split up the verses? I tried different formats on my work but nothing changes. Could you tell me what you did?

That's really good! I loved it!! You should definately write more songs! You're very talented at it!