yay! cool chapter! Dylan is awesome! she forgot she was married! LOL!

For a college kid (or whatever she's supposed to be), she's not that smart. I mean, if a guy you had *ABSOLUTELY NO* idea called your house and told you to go somewhere *alone*, would you just do it without hesitation? I mean, this guy could be a rapist, or, in her case, a serial killer, or something, and she doesn't have a second thought. That, in a sense, is a bit unrealistic. Some people are stupid, but come on. It would be a little better if you showed some inhibitions or something holding her back, instead of just automatically making her do it like a drone or a robot. To be real and believable, she has to portray some fear, right? :D Because a girl getting a phone call by a man she doesn't know and then just waltzing right over to the designated area doesn't seem very believable.