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| Atenea217 2007-02-06 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it... it's strange, because i don't tend to like regular poetry.. but i like how yours sound.. not sure that's my style, but who cares about me? It's good.. I'm curious whether you are a man or a woman.. sometimes you sound like one, sometimes like another.. i'm more inclined to think you are a man, though, because of the seriousness, but then you sound very soft as well.. but i guess that's what you want.. I have thought of doing so as well, not saying my genre, but why bothering? And, where are you from? I can see your native language is not spanish, but some of the expressions you use are not said that way in english, but in spanish language.. Anyway, i won't bother you any longer.. Have a nice day.. |
| Wolf's Night 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abusewow. very thought provoking with awsome rhythm. Hope its not from personal experience... keep it up b.c as usual its great :P ~Blood Horse |
| marinawings 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abusebeautiful poem, and one i can absolutely relate to. it perfectly describes a relationship i was in recently (he loves me, i don't love him, don't know what to do, etc.). it matters! anyway, i love the rhythm and flow to this poem. it's very... together, i guess you'd say. |
| Daughter of the Faeries 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem! (and yes, it matters) I really like the rhyme scheme you used in this poem. The last stanza was a little out of rhythm with the others because it didn't end with the "well,..." line. Other than that, it was amazing! Daughter of the Faeries |
| Maggot Blood 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI liked it good job and keep it up. Wolf. |