aww..this is so sweet..i really liked this poem! you did a charming job at it..I loved the flow of the poem, and the word choices..it just all..was beautiful!

"Relax dearest
there is no pedestal
I find your imperfections
archingly endearing"

Those were my favorite lines..you did an awesome job at this! Keep it up! I loved it! :D

~Britney

That was totaly sweet, i loved it! :)

I really like it.

"bitter on the tongue
of earthly burial
why waste effort
if breathing stops anyway?"

This stanza is kind of a little random but I am no one to criticize anyone's works. It's nice.