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| Arcane D. 2007-01-21 ch 1,  | abusehmm. i enjoyed how you incorporated colors into the poem, it gives a new meaning to the word "colorful". though i found some lines to be repetitive... the imagery is top-notch, as usual. and it seems you incorporate literary devices into poetry quite well. a suggestion that i have to offer is for you to make the rhythem and pace of your poetry more elaborate. i'll see you on your next update. ^_^ |