Indeed! Ha, keep that rebellion, but you're a smart one: put that to use.

I don't think the italics does much for this poem.

I really enjoyed your poem. I know no one can really say, good work, keep on going, because a poem is how you really feel, and no one can tell you how to express yourself. So, I am saying, I enjoyed your style of writing.

this poem seems to be happy at first, then it reveals its true message...i commend you on your authorial skills