Reviews for Well It Really Could Happen

a bitter kiss. 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abuseOh, it definitely wasn't bland. I just spotted a mistake on the last line, haha! [And as she took another drink from her vodka tonic her wide, femme fatale eyes flickered up at me and smirk played on her blood rush lips.] I think you forgot the 'a' before the word 'smirk'. Great writing. :D Keep it up!
Aimers 2007-01-16 ch 1,	abuseAh! This is such a teaser. You should really write longer fics. That would really be something to look forward to. Cheers, A.
l337 r0cX3r 2007-01-16 ch 1,	abuseNot bland at all... I suspect that some might say that it is, but I don't think so... Its supposed to hint at sex, and passion, etc., so why not leave it a little sketchy so that readers have to fill in the blurred areas and draw their own conclusions... I like that particular type of writing... Loved this one... ;) Jessie