Interesting...

It's quite short, but I like it. It strikes me as being a prologue of sorts. Is it intended to introduce a larger piece of work?

The break at the end of chapter two was good, lots of suspense. I'd be interested to see where the goes, if it goes anywhere.

whoa. Leave it at a cliffy why don't cha? >.> short and sweet. poor dude. He just wanted some ale. XD maybe he'll find something more when he reaches Kynk?

oh...sorry for mentioning this but do you mean lumination instead of lamination in the first paragraph? I just thought I'd show you that one little thing. ^^;

Great chapter! You've got to post more though when you leave us hanging! X.x