whoa...just...whoa.

I like the past that you establish between Vira and Lascivio in this chapter. It's quite interesting...Though I still think she's unstable. Lascivio really does seem like an interesting character, with an interesting choice of clothing as well. This chapter ,as I'm sure with other chapters after this, will only help me to match your ideals with the ideas that I have in store for my tales in the land of Kynk. _ Thanks for the stories. Great chapter. Update soon.

hehe. No offense, but right of the bat, everytime I read Mastraton's name, I sadly skim by it thinking "Masturbation ";

Darn you for making those dirty thoughts...*shakesfist* Poor kid, must've had hell of it with the name calling. XD Either way, I'll stop bashing his name. I just thought I'd tell you that...

I like the way you describe the story so far. But being in the queen's presence doesn't exactly seem like a fun place to be to me...She's rather...unstable sounding. In fact all of the court seems to be that way. An unfounded peace in a place crowded with tensions. I still like the story. It just definately isn't a place I'd like to be. Great job with the first chapter!