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| ThunderousMidNight 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuse"And the angry sea storm" A line that gives to me to ponder, perhaps it was a ~*Thunderous MidNight*~ smile You've good style of this Story with a moral. |
| Doodleflip 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseThat, I must say, is trés sweet. It's enchanting and with a lovely childhood rhythm, but its also interesting enough to capture a child's imagination, which is more than the average nursery rhyme does. It reminds me slightly of Rudyard Kipling. Good work! |