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ThunderousMidNight
2007-07-16
ch 1,
abuse"And the angry sea storm"

A line that gives to me to ponder,
perhaps it was a ~*Thunderous MidNight*~ smile

You've good style of this Story with a moral.
Doodleflip
2007-02-28
ch 1,
abuseThat, I must say, is trés sweet. It's enchanting and with a lovely childhood rhythm, but its also interesting enough to capture a child's imagination, which is more than the average nursery rhyme does. It reminds me slightly of Rudyard Kipling.
Good work!
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