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| FallenAngelFromTheSky 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseman, Amanda, you really know how to make a girl cry. sniffletearsniffle. this was amazing! i love it! |
| The White Angel of Darkness 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI know how you feel, man. I felt the same way when my granny died. It's really good, btw :) |
| Tomiko90 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseOh wow...this is very sad and deep. I love it though! :D You write good poems too. |
| phantomlov 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseI wish you didn't have to either... |
| Kidwiththecap 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abuseHI! I like the lines "I wish I hadn't". Deep man, deep. (remember when I said that last time? Ah . . . good times)Seriously though,I like that line. . . .I have been to three funerals. The first one I was like 7 and I cried. The second I was like 13 and I just sat there and felt uncomfortable while every one else cried, and the last one I laughed and had fun. Hmm . . .That was a little wierd. I think Cause I knew me Great Grand Father the best and he was funny person. And my Grandmother and her sister are comical. HA! Ah . . .the memeries. Whoa look at my super duper long reveiw. PEACE OUT! |
| Heartscryer 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is so... so.. touching! Do you need a hug? (ps. I like vampires too- at least, the fictional ones) |
| Captain Dark 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseVery touching. Poetry is a good way to express yourself. |