 RiBow. 2008-12-20 . chapter 1I'm sorry for your loss. This was a very sad and deep poem. The 'Goodbye' at the end really stuck to me somehow.
-RiBow. |
 DarkRose1593 2008-09-06 . chapter 1That's so sad, sorry for your loss. Very touching poem. |
 FallenAngelFromTheSky 2007-06-27 . chapter 1man, Amanda, you really know how to make a girl cry. sniffletearsniffle. this was amazing! i love it! |
 The White Angel of Darkness 2007-04-12 . chapter 1I know how you feel, man. I felt the same way when my granny died.
It's really good, btw :) |
 Tomiko90 2007-04-07 . chapter 1Oh wow...this is very sad and deep. I love it though! :D You write good poems too. |
 phantomlov 2007-01-22 . chapter 1I wish you didn't have to either... |
 Kidwiththecap 2007-01-16 . chapter 1HI!
I like the lines "I wish I hadn't". Deep man, deep. (remember when I said that last time? Ah . . . good times)Seriously though,I like that line.
. . .I have been to three funerals. The first one I was like 7 and I cried. The second I was like 13 and I just sat there and felt uncomfortable while every one else cried, and the last one I laughed and had fun. Hmm . . .That was a little wierd. I think Cause I knew me Great Grand Father the best and he was funny person. And my Grandmother and her sister are comical. HA! Ah . . .the memeries. Whoa look at my super duper long reveiw. PEACE OUT! |
 Heartscryer 2007-01-15 . chapter 1This is so... so.. touching!
Do you need a hug?
(ps. I like vampires too- at least, the fictional ones) |
 Doctor Dreamscape 2007-01-15 . chapter 1Very touching. Poetry is a good way to express yourself. |