I'm sorry for your loss. This was a very sad and deep poem. The 'Goodbye' at the end really stuck to me somehow.

-RiBow.

That's so sad, sorry for your loss. Very touching poem.

man, Amanda, you really know how to make a girl cry. sniffletearsniffle. this was amazing! i love it!

I know how you feel, man. I felt the same way when my granny died.
It's really good, btw :)

Oh wow...this is very sad and deep. I love it though! :D You write good poems too.

I wish you didn't have to either...

HI!
I like the lines "I wish I hadn't". Deep man, deep. (remember when I said that last time? Ah . . . good times)Seriously though,I like that line.
. . .I have been to three funerals. The first one I was like 7 and I cried. The second I was like 13 and I just sat there and felt uncomfortable while every one else cried, and the last one I laughed and had fun. Hmm . . .That was a little wierd. I think Cause I knew me Great Grand Father the best and he was funny person. And my Grandmother and her sister are comical. HA! Ah . . .the memeries. Whoa look at my super duper long reveiw. PEACE OUT!

This is so... so.. touching!

Do you need a hug?
(ps. I like vampires too- at least, the fictional ones)

Very touching. Poetry is a good way to express yourself.