I like it! Seems depressing, but it's pretty good.

So, it seems as if Allison's kind of a loner. This could get interesting!

this story is one of my favorite of all times.
there were times i felt hot even with a fan on me.
the tension and mystery in this story is what inspired me to start writing fiction ...stories. I will never forget this story as long as i live...at least i hope so

Ok, so, I came across this story a couple of months ago and only just returned to it now and started reading it. I'll tell you now that I love cliches and even if this doesn't end up being a cliche, I'll still probably love it. When it comes to stories n here, I'm not that hard to please. I have 2 stories up myself that don't have a ton of reviews. I'm not asking you to review them, but you're welcome to give me some constructive criticism when you have time.

Ohmygod... Ohmygod... Ohmygod... I am crying my eyes out right now. My first boyfriend, which I only liked--not loved-- was emo. He didn't commit suicide or anything because he knew I wouldn't be able to take it all in. Here's the problem: he was eight years older than me. I broke up with him because it was so wrong and gros. But, he recovered and I talked to him the other day after a few years. But, this story reminded me of him and how afraid I was he was going to die. And I'm afraid to be near the guy I currently like. Dx!
I loved this story and was hooked to it the whole day. I woke up at 5:30am and I just finished it now at 6:40pm. I. LOVED. IT! This story teaches you how to get over your emotional problems--minus the killing part--and deal with other problems in life.

Wow. This story hit hard for me but i loved it all the same. I've been through alot of this and reading and God brought me back to real life... i didnt go a far a A. and J. but im still younger then them and my rents watched and still watch me; they care and it helped me. Reading stories like this made me see the light of my actions and that i made the right choose of quiting. And the seven circles of teenage hell are true... there are few storie that i make soundtracks for and this is one of the few.

Omgah twisted story, but it was realy good. I liked it.

Amazing.

That was one of the best things I have ever read, published or not.

I feel hope you don't give this up on publishing. It's honestly an amazing written story, and just please don't give it up.

I clicked on this story from a recomendation from a friend, and I wasn't expecting for me to read the whole thing.

But I did. And it was..oh my god, I can't even explain it. With all the thoughts, and interactions, and everything about it...it was just perfect. :)

I hope that all the luck goes to you, and you do get published. I would be honored to get a copy of your book and put it on my bookshelf. :)

So, all the luck to you, and a wonderful job. :D

IChimpz ~ Ashley

Hey there. It's been so long since I've been on fictionpress lately, but I wanted to send you another review. The first thing I'd like to say, is that I'd love to recieve a copy of Allison Wonderland through email, if you're willing. I am more than willing to leave you a wonderful review on Amazon. Please let me know. My email is eileenprince @ sbcglobal . net.

Secondly, I'd like to request one thing from you. Please, please, do not give up on Allison. I know there are so many people out there that agree, as well as myself, that it is one of the best stories we have ever read. I hate that you've been through so much rejection lately, and it's truly unbelievable in the first place that you'd even be rejected. I have never been so affected by a story until I read yours, so keep strong. I know that Allison will be published eventually, and I know that I'd buy a copy in a heartbeat as soon as it is published.

Wow, this is such an amazing story! I love the characters and the ending made me cry -- it really pulls at your emotions. Your writing is truly amazing! I hope you get this published someday!

haha i totally guessed how this was going to end! she ends up surviving, she has to go to therapy and to top it all off, she's pregnant. ha but this was kinda sad, how did she go from a quiet girl to well wat she was wen she met Jeremy? and all with one meeting. good story tho *thumbs up* XD keep writing ur rlly good ;D

It's BrookeNichole again. I decided to just make a thing. Whadya know? Lol.

-BrookeNichole
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What is we don't have a Kindle? I don't.
I'm going to try to leave a review or whatever...
It wont let me!! Dammit!

Well, I tried.

Thanks for the amazing story.
:D

-BrookeNichole
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Me again. Let me know how it goes... I would so buy Allison Wonderland. My favorite thing I've read on here.

-BrookeNichole
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Omg! I am STILL Crying my eyes out. I couldn't belive that Jeremy didn't follow through on his side of the non-suicide pact. I seriously, had to go run and get tissues because I was crying so much. Jesus. I'm a wimp... But still. That was so sad. Jeesh!
Ahyway, I loved it.

-BrookeNichole
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