|Reviews for Crack in the Wall|
| a silenced revolution 4/28/07 . chapter 1
Great rhyming and rhythm! This made me think of how people tell me to be myself, but how can I be that person if I don't know who that is? Anyway, excellent job.
| rira-chan 1/21/07 . chapter 1
very wonderful poem. great message
| CrazyTurtles 1/16/07 . chapter 1
I like it, lots of different meanins could be found. Really good job.
| Ashelin 1/15/07 . chapter 1
Sometims it is so hard. Trying to be who you really are, but being afraid to show it. I struggle a lot with that. This is a beautiful poem, and I can tell you put work into it. Great job.