Hey I think this is your best so far

i like this piece, it has a great and very true message. simple words and rhyming worked well here too! good job! :) magnus

canadian...oh my canadain...U ROCK! i mean seriously what else is there to say? everything u write kicks bootie! lol

i liked this very much. i liked the blunt honesty in it. great job.

rira-chan

P.S thank you for your reveiws!

Hey very well done i like it very much. Keep up the great work and can't wait 4 more.

I like it.

I love all of your stuff! This is exactly what I have been trying to do. Good job!

This is nice. I like the way you ended and the whole "truthfully you" concept.

Another wonderful poem. This is absolutely wonderful. And true. Great job, God bless.