this ** is pretty good... pretty damn good. ive never read things like this.

It's real, it's cool.

I like it when people write about things that they know about, and even if you are nothing like Paul, I'm sure that you know about it. You know? Whatever.

Anyway, it was great, the whole thing, EXCEPT the typos. You'd spell 'role' like 'roll' and stuff like that, or forget to put in a comma, etc.. Very distracting, espcecially when it comes to good stories like this.

8.5/10

Interesting details, and subject matter, and nice repetitions. While some may consider the ending bizarre, I consider it fitting. I'm pretty impressed at the level of detail with Paul's sister considering you have none.

Good stuff mate, I was a little worried at the start, but it was definitely an interesting read. Didja hand this in to WC?

Rancid alino shape shifting anime bastard. But the story itself was worth the whole read. I'm not morbidly obese, and I'm not malodorous, but the feeling's mutual between him and I on his first thoughts that he was desperate but not THAT desperate. Question: Did he have some sort of panic attack?

japanese girl comes into his room. guy accepts the fact that he's a lazy **? the end? thanks for the amusing read, though.