Whoa! This is great! I agree about the effect of the doctor. It does kinda have a slowing effect which is really neat. I was surprised at how well this worked for how short it was but its really great. Good job! Keep up the good work!

Woot freakin' woot, I really, really like the way that story was written... very well done, very well done indeed. I love the Doctor thing, my mind went into "slow-mo-pause" mode, you know, where everything moves super ultimately slow, and the doctor moves in and starts explaining. That whole scene kicked so much ass, by the way, but damn does she get beat up :P But she kicks their ass. I really liked the pace of the story, quick, but not too quick, you know? Just right for what it was.