|Reviews for Stay Awake|
| toxic-noodle725 2/2/07 . chapter 1
thats a sweet and yet a very creepy poem at the same time. dont wry its a good thing. i like it. keep it up!
| Kusje 1/28/07 . chapter 1
This was very interesting to me, and alot of the lines clung to me, honestly.
'You held me tight
Whispering to me sweets
And things I never heard
With eyes of liquid brown'
I loved that the most :) Great job! Oh and by the way, I used to be 'psycho romanticist'.
| free-to-dream15 1/25/07 . chapter 1
AW love it!
| Frore 1/21/07 . chapter 1
Dark and fun to read! Very... Soft? I know that is an odd way to describe a poem, but that is the feeling I get from this. Something like crushed velvet.
| Heartscryer 1/15/07 . chapter 1
I found this somehwat funny, since I was really tired when I read it. The bits "Don't fall asleep" somewhat jolted me awake.
It's an interesting piece. Great work!