thats a sweet and yet a very creepy poem at the same time. dont wry its a good thing. i like it. keep it up!

This was very interesting to me, and alot of the lines clung to me, honestly.

'You held me tight

Whispering to me sweets

And things I never heard

With eyes of liquid brown'

I loved that the most :) Great job! Oh and by the way, I used to be 'psycho romanticist'.

AW love it!

Dark and fun to read! Very... Soft? I know that is an odd way to describe a poem, but that is the feeling I get from this. Something like crushed velvet.

I found this somehwat funny, since I was really tired when I read it. The bits "Don't fall asleep" somewhat jolted me awake.

It's an interesting piece. Great work!