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| Phoenix sraet 2008-06-11 ch 13,  | abuseI'm addicted to this story, please don't leave us hanging. |
| thecamerawoman 2008-05-17 ch 13, | abuseWhat? No! o.o It can't end now! omfg you HAVE to post the next chapter. i swear on my ** life, if i don't get another chapter soon i will die. this is too ** GOOD. like.. it's not even funny. argh. i love this story to death. you have GOT to update soon. i'm not kidding. lolz xDD |
| cbprice25 2008-05-10 ch 13, | abuseI like it. Interested in more. |
| Erin J. Brielle 2008-01-18 ch 13, | abuseI quite enjoy this story. :D I really hope there's more on the way! |
| shinaynay 2008-01-04 ch 13, | abuseLove it. Would totally read next chapter. |
| gummybearmurder 2007-12-31 ch 13, | abuseI liked this chapter a whole, WHOLE bunch. Anything you could write that would lead them closer together would make me happy, but that's my only suggestion. Fixing their sexual frustration would be nice too, yeah? *wink* lol, happy new years. |
| justareview 2007-12-26 ch 13, anon. | abuseahh finally an update. nice christmas present but I REALLY wanted Percy to just kick her **. I was waiting for it and then she..kisses her. i was like..hm... hahaha update soon! and merry CHristmas! |
| LethargicLove 2007-12-26 ch 13, | abuseFor some reason, this chapter seemed different than your other ones. I don't quite know why though. Or maybe it's because I haven't read your writing in a while? Percy just seemed different, but it's a good kind of different. A different with a backbone. Anyway, until chapter 14. |
| Siana 2007-12-26 ch 13, | abuseThe beginning sounded a bit rough, as though you were getting back into writing again. It smoothed out at the end, though, getting back into what felt like its groove. Looking forward to next chapter, M included. Oh, and what about some serious revenge on the brother? Random thought, but it would be so very sweet. |
| jekodama 2007-12-26 ch 13, | abuseWhat the **? EW! Why the hell did she kiss Lucy?! OMG! I hope Percy didn't catch any STD! Thank God AIDS doesn't go with saliva! Go Percy! Kill Lucy! Go Percy! Kill Lucy! And I will definitely read the next chapter, whatever it is that you have planned. |
| Nyleve Nalloc 2007-12-26 ch 13, | abuseM rated? This story isn't really for 13 year olds, so pull the trigger. I was expecting it a long time ago. *smirk* Glad to have you updated. Good luck with the new! |
| gulistanlik 2007-12-26 ch 13, | abuseHm I wouldn't read the M rated part. I'll just scroll down to the non-M rated part after it. Yay! you updated! This is interesting! I'm still trying to see where this is actually going. I do wonder... gulistanlik |
| tallyface 2007-12-25 ch 13, | abuseIf the new story is written anywhere near as good as this story is I'll definitely be reading it. I check my e mail every day with bated breath hoping that you updated! |
| Erin J. Brielle 2007-12-10 ch 12, | abuseI'm so glad you updated this! I really enjoyed seeing this from Davey's perspective. i really hope you keep going, this is still my favorite story. |
| Pirate'sBlackWolfs 2007-12-03 ch 12, | abuseno! how could u end it in the same place?! watnextwatnext?! ::** head to the side:: ::grin::very nice, by the way |