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| criti-sized 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this poem seems to be full of confusion and mixed emotions. I really like the portrayal of emotion and thoughts that you had. There was nothing wrong with the rhyming and it all fit somehow. C.S. |
| UnseenPhoenix 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this, and I like your work. |
| Keisha Russell 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abusePeter, this poem is perfection. And I have made that choice, for you! Lol, a definite favourite of mine. Alot of people think ryhming is too contrived, but with you I feel like it's something you're really saying because you really let yourself into your poems. The end was beautiful, the message was beautiful! Thank you for sharing it. |