and mermaids that’s.. that are

I really really love the extended sea metaphor... its beautiful nad I love that ending... so sad and desperate.. awesome awesome piece

Oh oh oh I LOVE this writing. I am so taken with the seashore and this writing gives to me to smile. I can feel that I am all tucked up within that shell with a child's seacastle close by and just waiting for ...the swish... of curling waters when tide has brought them back to me in full measure.