its been long since you lasst updated. this story really have lots of potential. i miss dev and rea. i do hope you will continue soon and have the chance to finish this wonderful story.

Your story is super! not going to lie its better than loads of books i've actually bought and paid for. I hope The next chapter comes soon!

awesome no time to write a well rounded critique so ill just say its amazing

I was looking through my stories when I found this one. You haven't updated in over a year! I really hope that you haven't abandoned this story. It really is such a good story. I hope you continue it.

Wow. Wow.

I'm very very intrigued.

Yay, I was totally right! It makes the story very exciting. It's too bad Albion lost his memories. It would have been great for them to truly be reunited. Back to reading!

Even though I hate spoilers, I feel I must ask. Is Albuin Rea's brother? I could be totally wrong, but that's what I feel the story is leading to. Besides that, I find this story exquisitely fascinating. I don't read fantasy stories very often, but when I do they always turn out to be good ones.

I really enjoyed reading this story. I think you've got a wonderful plot going. I also enjoyed the character portrayals. Good job!

I hope you continue writing this story!

Jaliy!

Miss this story. Hopefully, uou'll update this story. It deserveds to be finished soon.

I love the story so far! It's a bit confusing in some parts, but maybe it will clear up a bit as the story progresses?

It's pretty cool how you incorperated actual religous aspects and people in it :)

I can't wait for the next chappie! :P

I discovered this story while browsing the options availiable to me. I decided to give it a try. To say the least, I am in awe of your talent and I can't wait for more. I realize that you haven't updated in a while, and I was wondering why. Please, please, please update soon!

Thanks for the amazing story,

Eva

So I am absolutely in love with this story... the only problem is that you haven't updated since MARCH! And it is December...

I really do love this story... it's very different. It makes me think of Diane Duane's wizard books a little bit, but at the same time your story is unique.

I can't wait for an update!

He's her brother!

I figured it out last chapter, but the red hair just proves it

I love it!

This sounds amazing so far... it is a bit creepy that they are sort of brother and sister, they're not, but they share parents and that's a bit strange...