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Reviews For: Pretend
chaibffwitwwa 2007-03-01 . chapter 1
Cute. That little boy knows a lot, though...I mean, for someone so little, he pretends a lot of drastic questions that people slightly older than teens ponder...not little kids. That makes the point you make really stand out.
a bitter kiss. 2007-01-16 . chapter 1
Fate does work in strange waves. But wow. A little boy playing a game this.. deep? How cool. :D
Daughter of the Faeries 2007-01-16 . chapter 1
I really like the thought that goes behind this piece... Fate does work in strange ways. I found it a little strange that this was all the game of a little boy; it seems too deep for a child's game of pretend. Other than that, it was great.
Keep writing!
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