i love it. you wrote something happy and if it means what i think it means then consieder it a hell yes if not then i will wait until it dose.

I almost thought this was a limerick, at first. Hm, I think this is your first, like, short poem. I like it, though I think the ending would have flowed better if you changed 'until' to 'till.'

Wolfie

Short and to the point. Nicely done!

Very sweet and short. I particularly liked the first line.