I think you are pretty blunt with this oneshot, coming right out and saying " it would be their loss in the end. They shouldn't know what a good person they were missing out on." I think you have a great idea here, and if you showed that concept instead of coming right out and stating it, your piece would be greatly improved. I like that the boy does not have a name. This piece has so much potential! Nice job.

Greype Juice

I feel bad for the boy. This story shows the strength and yet the pain in some childrens' lives.