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water lily nymph 2007-01-20 . chapter 1
very light yet almost deep reflection on the nostalgia of childhood. i think there are times we all wish the world was as simple as it once was. although, it's strange to think it was still the same world, isn't it?
angel-dark 2007-01-18 . chapter 1
You're right, sometimes the best poetry is the one that doesn't rhyme..i think this is one of them. It's very honest and innocent.
Might want to try capitalizing the beginning of each line instead of each sentence...may make it look neater.
carousel chorus 2007-01-18 . chapter 1
I love this. Especially the last line. Great work!
Happy Writing & thanks for the reveiw!
~PottersSweetie17
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