hahaha, ive even almost forgotten my pen name! ooh, here i am back visiting the wonderfull world of fp, more acurately, yours!!

ow, to the climax, the story was so captivating I'm gonna try to find this song and download it! (oh, oasis!!)

expect another comment after listening to song a few times, reading lyrics, getting to like, then doing as thee suggested and reading story with song... whosh! goodnight for now dear!

OMG! Wow that was really sudden. Very well done though. You started it as though you were making it into a long story and then...BAM! Totally amazing. Keep up the awsome work gawjus!