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| Lac3d w1th p01s0n 2008-03-22 ch 4,  | abuseAnd you leave it at a cliffie... OH THE CRUELTY! I like this story... It's cute and fluffy with a hint of cliche, but it's still adorable. I'd review more, but I have to leave :( L0v3, p01s0n |
| SerialXLain 2008-02-17 ch 4, | abuse"Hugs and kisses, The Benevolent Clan.” Lol... Quite action-packed. :O That damned clan... lol |
| Roman Candles 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abuseThis is definitely a different story, but I like it. Please update soon. |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2008-01-06 ch 4, | abuseYES! NEW CHAPTER! revision isn't importent. ha. chaste thoughts? who needs them? aha! i knew the butler was evil! what are remarkable boy's super powers? MWAH! DON'T KIDNAP ROMERO! they kidnapped him. *glares at air* can't wait for more! much love x |
| Mademoiselle Rouge 2008-01-06 ch 4, | abuseYay ! An update ! I like the action dialogues, there's so cliché and cheesy :D Hope you'll update soon :) |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-05 ch 4, | abuseCan't wait to see what happens next. hopefully romero gets rescued and the family doesn't fall into the trap. |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-05 ch 3, | abuseOh no! I hope the lovers will be alright. |
| Wittyilynamed 2008-01-05 ch 4, | abuseI love this! It's so gloriously dorky and cutesite and corny. But it's too funny. I think that sometimes you go a little to fast, like you just really want to get to the end so you can write the next part. xP I know what it's like, but try to slow down and add some more detail's for the readers to gobble up. Like, what does his outfit look like? Tell us a little more about his battles etc. Just give it a little more meat. Otherwise, I love it. Sincerely, Wit |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-05 ch 2, | abuseAww the happy lovers may be taking a break. I hope remarkable boy will be able to stop the clan. |
| portabellaprincess 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Nice start. Superhero saves lots of people with his fam and then finishes his date! He's good at Multitasking. |
| SerialXLain 2007-12-17 ch 3, | abuseDun dun dun indeed. :O xD This is such a cute...different...little story. :D /** review xo |
| Yelizaveta 2007-12-01 ch 3, | abuseyou have no idea how happy you've made me. |
| Wizard of Souls 2007-11-30 ch 3, | abuseI have one thing to say about your story...well, two things, but they tie in together: What man wouldn't want a hot, sexy, muscular superhero as a boyfriend? Seriously, this is what every comic book/saturday morning cartoon watching fan wants in their wet dream. I love it, please continue the updates. =P ~Wizard |
| Lerene 2007-11-30 ch 3, | abuseLove this story. Lots of fun |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-11-30 ch 3, | abusescore! new chapter! oh, ice lady, orginal. ;) whats remarkable boy's powers? i'm think one of romero's parents are gonna be EVEEL! oh. mysterious. update soon pleasio! x |