 i-wish-i-had-wings 2009-10-11 . chapter 4i thought romero was the bad guy's son, i'm glad he wasn't ^^ |
 kt-pl 2009-04-24 . chapter 4 This is so insanely awesome. It's cheesy and cliche but it's a whole lotta fun! I like the idea. I just love the superhero-Shakespeare tie-in, and how it works so well in this story. I like the dynamics you've played with here, with the superheroes being so cheesy that it's become epic. I hope you keep the humor intact, because it's a winning point in this story. I don't know if humor was your intention in placing some of those lines in there [like "Catch us if you can. Hugs and kisses, The Benevolent Clan."], but hey - it works.
I really wish you the best in writing this story. I hope you've written it, but I totally understand if you haven't (looked at the update date :D).
Enough of my blah. Thanks so much for writing this down! I've been looking for a story like this for ages! ;D |
 bart4nat 2009-04-02 . chapter 4Zomg! I'm halfway between "Go, Julian, GO!" and "Don't be an idiot and wait for back-up" Can't wait for the next one =P |
 bart4nat 2009-04-02 . chapter 2The Benevolent Clan? That is so cheezy I love it! Sometimes this just makes me laugh =P |
 Tigaroo 2009-02-26 . chapter 4where, might I ask, is the rest? |
 Pinocchio 2008-03-22 . chapter 4And you leave it at a cliffie... OH THE CRUELTY! I like this story... It's cute and fluffy with a hint of cliche, but it's still adorable. I'd review more, but I have to leave :(
L0v3,
p01s0n |
 SerialXLain 2008-02-17 . chapter 4"Hugs and kisses, The Benevolent Clan.” Lol...
Quite action-packed. :O
That damned clan... lol |
 Roman Candles 2008-01-11 . chapter 4This is definitely a different story, but I like it. Please update soon. |
 Wolf bathed in Star-light 2008-01-06 . chapter 4YES! NEW CHAPTER!
revision isn't importent.
ha. chaste thoughts? who needs them?
aha! i knew the butler was evil!
what are remarkable boy's super powers?
MWAH! DON'T KIDNAP ROMERO!
they kidnapped him.
*glares at air*
can't wait for more!
much love
x |
 Mademoiselle Rouge 2008-01-06 . chapter 4Yay ! An update !
I like the action dialogues, there's so cliché and cheesy :D
Hope you'll update soon :) |
 portabellaprincess 2008-01-05 . chapter 4Can't wait to see what happens next. hopefully romero gets rescued and the family doesn't fall into the trap. |
 portabellaprincess 2008-01-05 . chapter 3Oh no! I hope the lovers will be alright. |
 Wittyilynamed 2008-01-05 . chapter 4I love this! It's so gloriously dorky and cutesite and corny. But it's too funny. I think that sometimes you go a little to fast, like you just really want to get to the end so you can write the next part. xP
I know what it's like, but try to slow down and add some more detail's for the readers to gobble up. Like, what does his outfit look like? Tell us a little more about his battles etc. Just give it a little more meat.
Otherwise, I love it.
Sincerely,
Wit |
 portabellaprincess 2008-01-05 . chapter 2Aww the happy lovers may be taking a break. I hope remarkable boy will be able to stop the clan. |
 portabellaprincess 2008-01-05 . chapter 1Very interesting. Nice start. Superhero saves lots of people with his fam and then finishes his date! He's good at Multitasking. |