Reviews for Reach Out To the Hearts Around You

DiaRose 2007-08-04 ch 1,	abuseI feel bad that I’m offering nothing helpful in all of my reviews, but you don’t seem as though you could gain anything from my advice! This is really wonderful. A bit of a common sentiment, but written really well!
DarkBlysse 2007-05-22 ch 1,	abuse"Let our auras envelope the sum of God's thought"--It should be 'envelop' and not 'envelope' there. "The pinnacle of divine craft no longer apart... No, not lips, necessarily, nor arms wrapped 'round"--Those two lines were my favorites. They just stuck with me as soon as I read them. To me, they're mysteriously beautiful, but also powerful enough to scream at me and make me read them over and over again, trying to decipher what they mean. Great work!
from beneath the bell jar 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abusevery interesting and provocative. Well-worded, nice diction, good flow and meter. I liked the line "Smile as you would, not as the world does" Just one tiny complaint: "Just acknowledge with your acknowledger"...the word acknowledger sounds somewhat juvenile and I think it puts a damper on an otherwise very good piece. Um, maybe you could check out my new piece "Black Dahlia"? It would be much appreciated.
animegirl777 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abuse...And to all of the racist, sexist peices of S**T out there, may i just say, HAHA, go suck eggs this poem rox and ou suck!