|Reviews for In the Light|
| from beneath the bell jar 1/17/07 . chapter 1
I really really like this piece. It could be a very good song - reminds me of John Mayer or Gavin DeGraw. I love "Someday you'll wander home, even if home isn't here". The symmetry between the first two stanzas really makes the poem, and the last line finishes it off quite nicely. Well-done.
Um, maybe you could check out my new piece "Black Dahlia"? It would be much appreciated.