I can relate to this poem with the loss in my life and feeling like everything is slipping out of control. The last part about blues eyes made me smile because mine are and I've been trying to keep them shining for my loved ones still here with me.

Thats good too, where do you come up with this stuff

hi, im the one that said if u read one of my stories, ill read urs, and im glad i did, that was AWESOME!

Let me sit back and take in this amazing weaving of words, damn boy, I'm jealous. I love the imagery, I can almost see those not there not right lines in front of me, can almost feel the footsteps and their echoes. It's very ominious, and yet descriptive, haha I'm all tongue tied, great job :D

I'm not sure I know what this one is about, but I like the word choice, I like it.