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Reviews For: Those Days Were Allways Lazy

Judgement(Mathew
2007-01-20
ch 1,
abuseWow Joe you are really really good at writing
Exiled-Knight
2007-01-17
ch 1,
abuseThis makes me think of backpacking, and being one with nature and loving it. It's different, but hey poetry is not always what the poem is on the surface but how it leaves an impression on the reader. This one made me happy and content, your last lines were sad yet happy at the same time. They were content, and I like that a lot.
Ronnie
2007-01-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery very good, I cried. This is one of my favorites. You always could write the best poems, I love this. I wish I could write like you.
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