Lovely and heart-warming. Wonderful little snapshot into childhood. Makes me miss the carefreeness (word?) we all used to have. Lovely piece.

Um, maybe you could check out my new piece "Black Dahlia"? It would be much appreciated.

Lovely and unique--I love your style and rhythm and ideas. You might want to look at some of the transitions from one line to the next. Good job overall!

always write on :)