You are going into my favorite authors. I love your writing style. =)


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Wonderful, wonderful. The distinction between the stanza's is beautifully portrayed and all are finishes splendidly in the final stanza. It gave me a strangely peaceful feeling.

This has a wonderful gentleness of thought. In a dream-like way that could and may spread into reality at any moment, as the wanting is of things very possible and believable, and relatable. The time progression helps, "morning, afternoon, evening", in the first three stanzas first lines, to give this that all encompassing feeling of all the time. The subtle sincerity of this guides the reader along, and leaves the reader wanting the voice to have these things that are wished for throughout. "snippets-of yarn", also gives this a totality by wanting to "tie" them together to form something permanent. I like where this takes the reader, because the tone makes it comfortable to read. Excellent write. MD:77.

Wow, great poem. I love the idea behind this and you've written it incredibly well.