I burst out laughing when you said what Gen's real name was. I was honestly expecting Genesis, no kidding. And great school team name to go with the school name. Fieldworkers...oh, that would be embarrassing to have announced at the state football game...

I'm not complaining, but what was it that made you decide to use religious icons as characters? For some reason, it's funnier that you used those names! And are you in Spanish 1? Seriously, naming a high school the garden in Spanish...it was the names more than anything that made me smile. Interesting beginning.

Great story, update soon please :)

^_^ I really enjoyed this. I can't wait for an update...

I like it! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update ASAP! :D

I'm intrigued and looking forward to seeing where you go with this.