|Reviews for Roses|
| A Fire Rose 1/18/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful, beautiful concept! Very choppy, though, so maybe lengthen each line. But I love the imagery and the sibling love and the family history here.
| huimei 6/3/10 . chapter 1
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| SarahMerriman 2/7/10 . chapter 1
This is a very sweet poem. It is one of those poems that you just have to say aw after reading. However, I didn't really get a feel of the rythm... If you meant for it to be like that then good. I know there are some poems that are meant to sound like this, more like a short story than poetry. Anyway, it was very sweet. Keep writing.
| blueramblings 9/28/09 . chapter 1
sad story beautifully told.
| love fantasy 6/21/09 . chapter 1
hey poetlover, i love ur poems. it has real feelings. absolutely gorgeous! :)
| SummerSmilez 4/25/09 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem. I love it, thank you for writing it.
| Mabisco 2/4/07 . chapter 1
intense, i like it
one thing tho
when you put:
10 years ago
when I was a 5-year old
i was just thinking:
10 years ago
when I was her age
would sound a little better
| Andrew 1/21/07 . chapter 1
Deep, it tells a real story.
| Yeeger 1/17/07 . chapter 1
I love this one! You told the story wonderfully. Keep writing!