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| Mabisco 2007-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseintense, i like it one thing tho when you put: 10 years ago when I was a 5-year old i was just thinking: 10 years ago when I was her age would sound a little better nice tho! |
| Andrew 2007-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseDeep, it tells a real story. |
| Yeeger 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI love this one! You told the story wonderfully. Keep writing! ~Yeeger |