Wow its really well written though the stanzas don't match in number of lines but I think that is what gives it the cute little charm that makes you want to go on to the end of it. Now the ending, thats just funny as heck. I had a hard time not giggling in the middle of class when I read that last stanza. Its really good.

I love the symbolism in this one. Beautifully written.

Yeeger