While I highly doubt this was intended to be humoress, I think you tried too hard. The whole "child-speaking about a serious subject" is extremely difficult to pull off without seeming like you're trying to be political and failing, and I understand the message you were trying to convey, but, for me, it didn't work.

Wow! Thats really full of meaning. I really like how its serious but yet kind of humorous at the same time.