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Reviews For: Where are the stars

Glass in the Shape of a Hea...
2007-01-20
ch 1,
abuseI'm in a good mood from reading this now, lol. ^^ I love stars!
Gaki Toki
2007-01-18
ch 1,
abuseYou have a grammatical issue and a rhythm problem...maybe it sounds perfect to you but to me it's a little off. My knit-picky stuff doesn't inhibit my understanding of the meaning(s) though, that's the only thing that truly counts.

March birthday huh? I remember when I was fourteen (that makes me sound old *sweatdrop*) That was before I moved to this GODFORSAKEN STRIP OF LAND...sorry, violent outburst.

*coughs* Anyways, have fun with writing, that's all you can hope to do.

Gaki
Princess-anna57
2007-01-18
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. Awesome flow. Well described! Keep writing.

~Anna~ ^_^
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