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| Glass in the Shape of a Hea... 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI'm in a good mood from reading this now, lol. ^^ I love stars! |
| Gaki Toki 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseYou have a grammatical issue and a rhythm problem...maybe it sounds perfect to you but to me it's a little off. My knit-picky stuff doesn't inhibit my understanding of the meaning(s) though, that's the only thing that truly counts. March birthday huh? I remember when I was fourteen (that makes me sound old *sweatdrop*) That was before I moved to this GODFORSAKEN STRIP OF LAND...sorry, violent outburst. *coughs* Anyways, have fun with writing, that's all you can hope to do. Gaki |
| Princess-anna57 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Awesome flow. Well described! Keep writing. ~Anna~ ^_^ |