Wow...you're an amazing writer.

I love the raw emotion and the theme and the style... and well, I just love the poem. Great job, it's really beautiful. I'm off to read your other poetry now, keep on writing and thanks for the review.

I can relate to this one. I liked how you showed that things start off great, and how easily someone who feels like they're in love can get wrapped up in what was good, trying to convince herself that what she had was real in the first place, hoping that her love was not wasted. If this is based on true events, im sorry. It's by far the worst feeling. Well written though. I love the idea behind the repeated line, "we loved each other, i suppose." Showing how it felt like love, but now its in question.

this is pretty. :)
xx

Okay, this was just really raw with emotion, as if the girl is still trying to hold on the the love she lost. I love the bit about how he put your name in the title of every poem- genius.

I have to say, even though some people hate the bolding and italics style on this site, I don't mind them, as they do make some interesting sub-points. This is one of he best pieces I've read in awhile... great job! (and thanks for the review!)

This is amazing. I haven't read something this good in awhile. It spoke so true and it related to me so well. This is favorite, keep it up.

Gabby