Wow, what an awesome poem! I love this, great message and awesome metaphor here. Great work!!

interesting. preordained to die is an interesting concept, much appreciated by me, im glad to see something creative and deep. um yes. i enjoy your style : )

This is another "wow" for the day! I so happy to read this! I really love the way that you wrote this. Beautifully done!

I have to add it to my C2!


Best Wishes

This is a good piece, and I like the idea behind it, but it could be better if the lines weren't broken up and it was written as prose instead of poetry.

A gorgeous piece of art. :)

Much love,

THE MOTHER.