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| In State of Agony 2007-06-04 ch 1,  | abusei can relate...good work This world is ((In State Of Agony)) |
| magnusthewolf 2007-02-05 ch 1, | abusethis is another interesting piece but i dint really like the way the first line read, but i liked the way the last line does. |
| back row dancer 2007-02-01 ch 1, | abuseThere is something that is so beautifully and tragically resounding in this piece. I'm sorry you are having a hard time. I changed my pen name, I'm no longer Black and White Paintings. I thought I would inform you since you are the only one that has me as a favorite. Also, thank you for your many kind reviews. They are much appreciated. I'm sorry I haven't gotten around to posting (or writing for that matter) things lately... writer's block and lack of time, you know. Best Wishes. |
| boys kiss girls 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseAmen. |
| Basara 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusea problem in relationships alright... the aftermath... nice... |
| Crossing the Rubicon 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked the directness of this, and your use of parentheses. ["your name (face) haunted"]And I really love the last three lines. Good job. |