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| Fae Caspian 2007-06-30 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this. I definitely think it has some Bryson-esque feelings to it. I love Bryson btw. I think it's a really well written, articulate, and revealing piece. I really enjoyed it. My favorite line: the smear of greasy skin against windows told us that we were at our destination. It's so descriptive. |