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nectar in a sieve 2007-01-27 . chapter 1
and im so glad for the DARE program, it keeps scenes like this from our reality.
(the sad part is, this has been me on more than one occasion, and the funny part is, i couldn't care less)it's acceptable nowadays, falling apart at the seams and all that.

awesome
Smoky Bear 2007-01-18 . chapter 1
brutal, harsh and honest in a jim carroll kinda way ('i just want to be pure'and all that). great piece. the lines "**! voice
unused grating down on my knees picking them up" are particularly poignant.
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