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| Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-24 ch 1,  | abuseAgain, I like how much you say without spelling it out. It's quite intriguing, and I can't think of any reason why getting to imagine your own ending (to a NARRATIVE, mind you) would be a bad thing! But, erm, tea? I would believe it, and the first woman's voice, but if these are supposed to be college students...Well, the two certainly contrast a bit, don't they? I can't quite believe that they'll end up together, except that you tell me they do! --Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!) |
| Omok 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseLOL, i'd have to say this is more funny than femmslash =) or /fluff/ xD *laughs* i'd like to know what they did after the bill was paid? o_o; *jkjk* |
| thegirlisgonenow 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseadorable. I've half-pulled a similar trick before chickening out... |
| danielle 2007-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abusewoohoo!! cute!! they paid the bill and left to go have some fun! great job, adorable! |
| A to the M to the B ohscrew... 2007-06-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw! |
| Asylum Gates 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseaw! adorable! I love this story! makes me happy! :) |
| Orion Demasecus 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseAnd then went home to have some fun, lol. |
| Kitty 2007-01-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwh...^_^ I think this is really adorable. Lesbians are so cute (then again, I am one.) So yeah, I like this. |
| Lightning Storm 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI love when you write these type of stories... Great job |
| Endangered Thinker 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuse...I'd like a psycho lesbian named Paulette. Anyway, good job on the story. |
| a lonely september 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseaww... im loving these mini lesbian stories. theyre so cute. : ) ♥ |
| MikaelaBanes 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseAnd I thought this would be sumthing explict. *rolls eyes* Anyways, that was really good! I enjoyed it! Good job! :) |
| RandoMaia 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseo.0 ...XDD Ahahaha awesome! Although I'm rather disappointed in the lack of sex scene. *cry* |
| hey maria 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseAww. This is so charming. |