|Reviews for UnSweet Sixteen|
| Undrahas 7/2/07 . chapter 1
love the detail about the flickering moonlight. it was cool.
| bipedalcooney 1/20/07 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. I love the powerful imagry here, it seems almost tangible. And the way the last line in itallics ends the poem is great. Amazing work and keep writing.
| The System Mother 1/19/07 . chapter 1
A very powerful piece!
I love... so... strong. :)
| Sargent Pepper 1/19/07 . chapter 1
I really didn't understand this. Could you explain it a little better. Joey