love the detail about the flickering moonlight. it was cool.

Beautifully written. I love the powerful imagry here, it seems almost tangible. And the way the last line in itallics ends the poem is great. Amazing work and keep writing.

:)

Michelle

A very powerful piece!

I love... so... strong. :)

MUCH love,

THE MOTHER.

I really didn't understand this. Could you explain it a little better. Joey