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| Undrahas 2007-07-02 ch 1,  | abuselove the detail about the flickering moonlight. it was cool. |
| Guardrail 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. I love the powerful imagry here, it seems almost tangible. And the way the last line in itallics ends the poem is great. Amazing work and keep writing. :) ~Michelle |
| The System Mother 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseA very powerful piece! I love... so... strong. :) MUCH love, THE MOTHER. |
| Sargent Pepper 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI really didn't understand this. Could you explain it a little better. Joey |