| Reviews for UnSweet Sixteen |
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Undrahas 7/2/07 . chapter 1love the detail about the flickering moonlight. it was cool. |
bipedalcooney 1/20/07 . chapter 1Beautifully written. I love the powerful imagry here, it seems almost tangible. And the way the last line in itallics ends the poem is great. Amazing work and keep writing. :) Michelle |
The System Mother 1/19/07 . chapter 1A very powerful piece! I love... so... strong. :) MUCH love, THE MOTHER. |
Sargent Pepper 1/19/07 . chapter 1I really didn't understand this. Could you explain it a little better. Joey |