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Reviews For: UnSweet Sixteen

Undrahas
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuselove the detail about the flickering moonlight. it was cool.
Guardrail
2007-01-20
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written. I love the powerful imagry here, it seems almost tangible. And the way the last line in itallics ends the poem is great. Amazing work and keep writing.
:)
~Michelle
The System Mother
2007-01-19
ch 1,
abuseA very powerful piece!
I love... so... strong. :)

MUCH love,

THE MOTHER.
Sargent Pepper
2007-01-19
ch 1,
abuseI really didn't understand this. Could you explain it a little better. Joey
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